Mrs Bartram's word, we are finding blogging together as a class a great warm up for our own writing. It is interesting to share our ideas and find ways to improve on what has been written. In the above we changed some words around in a sentence so that it made more sense, we added details that really helped to explain the way that we were taught to hold the ball and we added in some speech that helped to clarify and idea. I am really impressed with our class as we work on these pieces together, the conversations about writing are really valuable and the students are then able to go into their own writing and use the ideas of others to improve their work.
We have included all of the photos from today's session as we wanted to share our own with everyone at home, some great action shots. If you want to keep these pictures of your child, simply download them and save them to your computer.